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Review:Joanne K says:
I found it to be a different and interesting way of writing that I have not seen before, and I did like it. I was almost poetical, almost like a song. It really felt like I was looking into Pansy's mind and seeing her stream of thoughts. My only criticism is that the repetitiveness did start to get a little annoying by the end of the piece and perhaps was overdone, which ruined the initial effect. However, I did feel that the ending was quite strong and I loved this line:

"He's saying hello; I'm saying goodbye."

A lovely piece of writing.

Author's Response:
Thank you (: I'm glad that I'm getting some crit about the repetitiveness - so far I've got some likes, but I think I was hoping for someone to crit about it. I wasn't too sure, and I'd like to have a companion peice to this one feat. Draco and Astoria ^_^

Less repetitiveness. I'll remember that (;

I thought that line was sort of hard to write. I wanted to make it mean something. I love the fact that you like it ^_^

Thanks, once again.

--Malia


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