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Review:Joanne K says:
Very powerful writing. You used description well in this piece. My favourite line:

"The poison has reached its mark, and the pain in his chest is equal to that of a knife wound. A knife wound, though, would have been much quicker."

You write very well and I only picked up on one grammatical error:

"who he still loves with all that is in him" - It should be 'whom'.

I almost wasn't even going to bother mentioning it, because it was drowned out really by the rest of your fantastic writing. A great piece.

Author's Response: 'Who' and 'whom' have always been my downfall -- even though I technically know when you're supposed to use them, I never think of it. I'm glad you did point it out. I've just submitted the edit!

This review has me smiling! Thanks so much, Joanne!


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