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Review:Leent says:
Back again :) I really liked it, to be honest. What was most interesting was that Alanna began to take further steps here, more than her usual backing down, and began to grow again. That was great. Oh, and naturally I loved the beginning, seeing things from Rabastan's perspective, and of course a minor appearance of Sirius Black. Really lovely that ;)

This was a good chapter that put some upswing on the momentum. And now, I need to read more, so excuse me for not getting into too much detail this time.

Author's Response: Yep, I'm having Alanna grow little by little from the beginning of the story. I figured it'd be boring to read chapter after chapter of her NOT changing. Besides, it's fun to freak Rabastan out. =]

Rabastan's point of view will come in more and more as the story shifts its focus to what's going on outside the Lestrange house. And I couldn't help but put Sirius in there. You know how much I love him.

Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you're still enjoying it!

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