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Review:Leent says:
Hey Gabby ~ I think I've fallen a bit behind here...and I really have been wanting to catch up.

What can I say? I really enjoyed this chapter immensely. As always, your descritpions were driving, and the story moved fluidly. The flashback was just perfect! It gave us a great perspective into why Alanna feels the way she does. Poor thing, guess that's why a girl should never fall completely for her crush, eh? But it was beautifully written, and gave that further insight.

"he bundled her into his embrace and breathed peace into her body through her lips" - dang! That was good :)

I will try to read the rest over the next day or so. Another fantastic chapter! Smiles

Author's Response: Yes, that's great advice for us girls. Unfortunately, sometimes this kind of thing can't be helped, especially for someone in Alanna's situation. Haha, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reading and reviewing!!

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