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Review:Paul says:
If you edited this so much i am curious as to how you missed the following.

His face was barely unrecognizable (recognizable not unrecognizable)

He took of his shoe, and drew his wand. (spelling - off not of)

trying to source the internal bleeding (grammar - should be - trying to find the source of the internal bleeding)

his limbs open in wide X (grammar - should be - his limbs open in a wide X)

The it clicked. (missing letter - Then it clicked)

Author's Response: lol stop stop stop. Enjoy the story for what it is and keep quiet. or sign in with a real account and be held accountable. but you wont do that, now would you?

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