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Review:whacked says:
aw, so bittersweet. sigh. i kind of want a sequel for this. it just seems liek a really good prologue, and i was about to click "next chapter" and there was no button!!
but that line is very true - “Some boys would rather just be boys than spend time with girls.”
and it works the other way around too.
this was really well written. you managed to capture her hopeless longing. 10/10. even though i felt like sticking a pin through a sirius voodoo doll. but hes too pretty for that anyways.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

I sort of like it as a one-shot, because I don't know if I trust myself enough to write a believable, non-cliche Sirius/OC, haha! I just enjoyed exploring this one little moment in time, thinking about what this girl was like, since we don't know anything about her from canon, other than she was staring at Sirius.

Hopeless longing is a good way to describe it, and exactly what I was going for! I'm glad you liked it -- thanks again! ^_^


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