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Review:Liza says:
Awww thats so cool!!:) they finally got together!
I liked this chapter, it made me smile :)
The whole Hannah /Al thing is a really good part of the storyline because it shows how realistic teenage relationships are and i like how well you do that.
I loved how you described Roses happiness at the start too, it actually made me empathize with her so much that i felt happy :P
Nice chapter and good luck with your busy schedule :)

Author's Response: Hey :) I'm glad you liked it! There were so many directions I could take the story and Rose and Scorpius' relationship after the happenings in the previous chapter but I thought that finally it was time for them to get together. At least to see how it goes.

This is probably my favourite Al/Hannah part of the story, I really loved writing it. I'm relieved you see realism in their relationship because it's something I want to get across. I want to get a nice middle ground of not being non-plausible and not being mad declarations of love - just something balanced which shows genuinely how people can be. They are fantastic characters to work with, there's something about each of their personalities I love.

I find it so hard to write emotions which I can genuinely feel myself if you know what I mean. Whenever I write a particular emotion I always totally fictionalise it in a way and don't write from my personal experiences because it just always sounds so strange to me. This was an exception :P I really wanted to capture that unstoppable smiling when you're just so happy you can barely contain it. It's great you could empathise with it!

The busy schedule, as ever, seems to be becoming busier and busier but thankfully I am back at Uni and the internet seems to be working for now! Thank you for the absolutely lovely review and for continuing to read the story!

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