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Review:long_live_luna_bellatrix says:
This was a really sweet little one shot! I like the idea of it, and you wrote Sirius really well. You perfectly told of his popularity and his politeness and balanced the fact that he was the height of cool and yet obviously not a bad person. This is the Sirius I've been picturing all these years. I also really liked the line about foolishness of asking him to Hogsmeade; it made both of them look even more human. And the ending was really touching, when he's laughing with his friends and she's all alone. Really nice work. A good length, a good one shot.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you liked it. I was trying to characterize Sirius differently than he's normal written, but also keep a lot of his appeal -- and to be honest, I find this mysterious, aloof, boyish Sirius even more appealing than ladies' man Sirius!

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed this! It was a fun writing experiment. :-) Thanks again!!

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