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Review:jadelouise says:
Great one shot, very cute and sweet.

The story line is very nicely written, I like how you including the quiddich practice into the story. It develops the story well.

There are a few sentences where I would change the wording, but thats just my opinion!

I also like the how you included the title into the story too.

Well done :)

Author's Response: Haha, I wrote this rather hurriedly and only did serious editing when I previewed it here; it took me an hour and a half to finish. xD

The plot took long to think of and I just wrote everything down really fast as soon as it was all planned in my mind. Good to see that the hard work pays off.

The sentences I know should be improved but it's your opinion, anyway. I also wanted the title in the story to add a little zing to it, you know.

Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it! :D

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