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Review:AntigoneBlack says:
This is a very interesting scenario. I loved the characterization of Luna, she was wonderful. You really hit her spot on.

Since we don't know a whole lot about Cedric, you can really create a persona for him, which you started doing here. I think that you are on the right track, as he has to be nice obviously, and you can do as you wish from there. Since you just started I haven't seen a lot of the character yet to be a judge if he's in character. From what I see he is though.

I do want to mention that if you make this a Cedric/Luna piece she is 13 and he's 17. That might be an issue.

Author's Response: Even though I write Luna a lot, I still find her very difficult to get right, so I'm really pleased that you thought she was ok. She's a wonderful character, but so hard to write.

As you say, there's not a lot known about Cedric, so I actually found it difficult to write him rather than easier as I thought, as I wasn't sure what readers thought about him. At least he's going ok in the first chapter! That has to be good lol.

I calculated the ages right then, that's good, I know he was mentioned as looking around 17, but I could never remember if he was a year or 2 years older than Harry. Thanks for mentioning it, now I know I have it right.


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