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Review:AntigoneBlack says:
I wonder why you decided to re-write, first off, since I really liked it the way it was.

But I think that this was a really good first chapter, and I really like how you introduced the OC. You just threw us into a moment of her and Peter's life and I loved that. Introdutions are often akward, and you avoided that.

I hope that you will keep this going, and I'd love to keep looking it over.

Author's Response: The other one didn't have much direction and I came up with a plot, but it required them to be childhood friends, which was impossible in the first version because I had already written the chapter about how they met haha. I'm glad that you liked this chapter and I'll definitely rerequest when the next chapter comes out!

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