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Review:Burke says:
Congratulations on an AMAZING piece of work here.

I love the characterisation of Dolohov, his lack of care for his appearance, the joy he gets from causing pain, it demonstrates perfectly a psychopath mentality, nothing to cause the evilness, no haunted past pain that he's tryin to rid himself of, just purely born evil...

I love the writing, the setting, the descriptions, how you flow so easily in and out of the flash-backs, and the conversation between Tom and Dolohov.

The conversation is amazingly well written, it is realistic, Tom is not made to be some odd strange unstable crazy, but rather a calm, planning, manipulative, cunning mastermind who knows what he wants and will do anything to achieve this.

I love the duel scene, very well written as these action/fighting scenes are very difficult to write, so I applaud you on that with a standing ovation.

All over a well rounded, well written piece that captured me hook-line- and sinker.

I love deatheater stories, and hope that the other chapters/parts of the collaboration are as addictive as this on!

10/10

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you! :D

Thanks for the compliments ^_^

Characterizing Dolohov and Tom was so much fun - I loved the chance to put the two of them together. And I'm glad you liked the duel scene - it was hard to get it to work properly.

Thanks again! :D


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