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Review:DeaVanity says:
Hello, I'm finally reviewing :)

Well, I'll star with CC if that's alright with you :D .

1) when you're talking about the differences between Dom and Vic, I thought there were too much ''unlike me'', but, that was how you accentuated the differences, though the word choice could have been better ;D .

2) there was some tense mixing but nothing major and I think that when you read it through and edit a bit, you'll notice it immediately and fix it (though I think that it doesn't subtract from the story much) xD .


Enough CC! hehe

Anyways, I like Dom/Teddy pairings, in fact, I love every next-gen. pairings lol because there's so much you can do with the characters since they're a lot like OCs :).

The story itself was funny at times (you made me laugh ;D) and the plot was okay and James was hilarious, hehe, all in all your characterizations and the plot were good! :D

Thanks for requesting :D

~ DeaVanity

Author's Response: Hey. :)
1) I really meant for Dom and Vic to be different but yes, I see what you mean; the word choice ought to be improved. :D
2) I could fix the tense easily enough; thanks for pointing it out, though. xD


Yeah, I love Dom/Teddy and other next gen pairings! They rock. :)
I'm glad you thought it was funny; James was my favorite to write here! Thanks a lot.

Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it! :D

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