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Review:HogwartsGirl618 says:
Caz! Caz! Caz! You wrote a Sirius story! He's my favorite cannon character! =) And I adored your writing! What a wonderful piece of reflection! Your opening was completely captivating and the distinctions he draws: fascinating.

So you see I am not blameless, but I am not guilty of the crime they have locked me away for.

Excuse me while I go squee. That was such a powerful sentence and the tone was so very Sirius. I had chills, I kid you not.

I also found your time frame so very interesting- because it puts Sirius in a perfect position to narrate. The fact that as he says, his obsession is something he must focus on (sort of as a way to stay sane and to get revenge) but he's being driven insane (and is halfway there). It's such a gray line paradox- which is absolutely creative. That happens so often yet it's never written: that which kills us makes us stronger. And 8 years in he's in this mental state, so very balanced and unbalanced at the same time.

You did a wonderful job of illustrating why he would go after Peter as well - the spark, I should say. Being denied Harry. I always attributed it to Lily's and James' deaths, but you just completed the mental picture for me. That would set him off as well.

I adored it. Go and do a little dance because it is a wonderful piece. =)

-tackles with hugs-

Author's Response: Why hello :D

Thank you so much for the review! Seriously I was really worried about how this one shot would be recieved. I have never ever wrote anything with Sirius so it was a big challenge for me. I love him as a character and although this is not the longest piece I would like to write more.

I'm glad you understood that I was trying to potray Sirius as this very messed up, broken man but at the same time he has not given up completely, afterall he has Harry to think about.

Thank you so much and I loved 'The Pyre' it was wonderful and chapter 13 of Safe is in the queue *jumps about and high fives the air* feels like its been forever.

Thanks again hun, Charly :D x


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