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Review:harrylilyjames says:
This is the last review I can give for this story, if you want more come back to my thread :)

The chapter was really nice, but I just don't get why she would jump to the conclusion of Bella over the simple black pin she found on the jumper. I'm just kind of lost on that.

But it was a another wonderful chapter, your descriptions are brilliant.

I have nothing else to say... which is good. Just hope you keep writing it. =]

Author's Response: Oh, the black pin was a flower, so she knew it was a girl's. They'd been living together for 4 years, so at that point there's no reason for Rab to wear some other girl's token on his sweater unless...Haha. Bella was the one who originally brought up Rab's infidelity, remember? And she's the only one of Rab's female friends Alanna knows of, so she thought of her immediately. But right afterwards, she convinces herself it's not her.

Thanks so much for your reviews, I really appreciate them.

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