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Review:Liza says:
Scandal :)!!
Its getting pretty exciting :D
These last two chapters were really good and i really enjoyed them :)
Your writing really amazed me in this chapter..i thout it was really good and getting even better :) I also liked learning more about Dawn as a person and her past as it was really interesting.
Sorry i couldn't review sooner..i broke my computer and i can only get on on my phone now :( but i will still make sure to get on in five days for more cos i'm truly on the edge of my seat :) x

Author's Response: Oh I know, scandals going on left right and centre :P I'm glad you think it's exciting. I've felt like it's a bit dull! It isn't half hard keeping it all action packed lol.

This chapter...I still have reservations about. Normally I leave myself a lot more time to rewrite bits I don't like but this one was a bit more rushed so I didn't get the chance. No doubt I'll do some rewriting in the future but nonetheless I was pretty pleased with the kiss all in all.

My writing took on a bit of a life of its own in this chapter! I honestly went completely mad. It turned massively descriptiony, but I kinda liked that - great to know you appreciated it too.

Dawn was somebody I needed to still give some info about, after all more characterisation had been added to Eve and Hannah so it was only right that Dawn got the same treatment. I like her, I have a friend just like her - who's kind of the mum to everybody and keeps them out of trouble.

Never apologise for not reviewing sooner! I am over the moon that you reviewed at all :) I must apologise for the late response, I've had a busy few days.

Today - technically is update day. However I'm sorry to say the new chapter probably wont be up till tomorrow, everything will be explained in the author note. Sorry about the wait and thak you for the beautiful review!

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