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Review:Eridanus says:
This is an amazing Sirius. I think I can go as far as to say that he's the epitome of how I see Sirius or how I think he should be. Standoffish is a perfect way to describe him. I see him finding it quite hard to trust people, which leads to him being rather aloof.

And the girl! I love missing moment type pieces and this one in particular is exemplary. You manage to get her emotions across very well and my heart was breaking for her. This is a brilliantly sad story.

Another, slightly random, point I would like to make is that I love the details you have included. Little things such as talking about the chimaeras and manticores really added a sense of authenticity to the piece and I really enjoyed it.

Fabulous work!

Author's Response: Thank you, Jane! This is definitely how I see Sirius -- maybe extroverted around his friends, but overall a very private person, almost like a loner if if weren't for the fact that his best friend is the coolest guy in school. ^_^ I actually find this Sirius a lot more alluring than the ladies' man Sirius, as well.

I'm glad the emotions came through for you in this piece -- it was definitely a challenge, doing it in 500 words when we don't know anything about her to start with!

And I appreciate your comment on the details. I always try to be conscious of adding in things that will really set the story in the magical world, so thank you for noticing!

I appreciate the review!

Melanie


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