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Review:harrylilyjames says:
Oh no!!
My heart just plummeted to the pit of my stomach when he told her that she was going to be here when his friends were around. She was so happy about meeting them and then he tells her that she cant come, how horrible!
Okay, I just have to say OMG!! You wrote Bella wonderfully. She is like my favourite Death Eater, so twisted and cold, and you pulled her off...well done!!
I felt sorry for poor Alanna, I would hate to be in her position- face-to-face with Bella and not even her lover would help her out...poor woman. =(
My heart is actually aching for her right now, because she clings onto Rabastan like he's her life force, but she's nothing special in his life, he treats her like dirt.
This was a really good chapter.

Author's Response: Haha, yes, it's horrible, but Rabastan isn't keeping her away from them to be mean. He's just afraid she might find out the many bad things that he's doing behind her back - and he has good reason to be afraid. Look at what happened when she met Bella. =] Glad you liked her, btw. Some people expected her to be crazier, but I think she must've been subtler before Azkaban. Still, Rab doesn't have the cojones to stand up to her, and Alanna certainly isn't a match. And yeah, Rab's just a stinking coward and he keeps her around because it makes him feel better about himself, but in next chapters you'll see more of his pov and maybe you'll sympathize more. =] Thanks for the review!

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