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Review:Cedrics Blueyed Girl says:
Hey there, it's jetergirl from the forum =]

So, the way I roll, is I like to give some constructive criticism as well as telling you the things I enjoyed about the chapter! That way you can improve, and feel good about your writing ;)

I'll start out with the CC: Okay, well, the content/plot of the story is great, but here and there your grammar and word choice could use a little work. It's obviously not a huge deal, but just something to keep in mind when you edit through!

Other than that, it was a great story! I love next gen. pairings like this one and you did a pretty nice job of portraying the characters and their motives throughout the story!

If you ever need advice on another story, just let me know and I'd be happy to help you out ;)

~CBG

Author's Response: Hey. =)
I see; I'll try to improve my grammar and word choice. I'll be sure to keep that in mind! The plot just came to me so I wrote it down. Next gen is really nice to read and write so it was fun portraying the characters.

Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it! :D


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