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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Hi Kalina! :]]

This was pure, unadulterated beauty. Such an amazing interpretation of Remus and Tonks's relationship. I love that you tied nature into the piece; it was more than just the moon, it was the stars and the wind. That was absolutely gorgeous. "Her heels hit the ground, and a cool breeze comes in to kiss her body." - This was, by far, my favorite line. It ties in the nature aspect of the piece nicely. You could have said that the moon's glow kissed her body, rather you chose to use the wind. For me, this was truly symbolic. It shows that their relationship is in shambles, but the baby keeps them together.

Also, I really enjoyed the tense that you used in this story. It just really worked well. Overall, I truly enjoyed this. It is amazing.

10/10

Shelby

Author's Response: Oh, Shelby. *huggles*

Nature is a /huge/ influence on my writing, mainly because I write next to the window with it open, typically, so all the breezes and the scents come in to my room and make me feel so much more alive. Ooh, that sentence. You know, this was one of those one-shots that you just write mindlessly, and the words just come. :) It's a real pleasure. ^_^ And sadly enough, their relationship is falling apart, like a house of cards. :( I feel so cruel, but that's the sad truth.

Thank you so much for the review, my dear! *hugs* I'm thrilled you liked it. ^^
XOXO, Kalina


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