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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
Holy crap on a stick, I wish I could write something so beautiful in the span of 40 minutes! Once again, you blew me out of the water. This was. . .well, it was stunning. Normally I'm not the biggest fan of Sirius/Lily fics, but this. Wow. That's really all I can say. Despite its length, you gave their relationship depth instead of just being all 'Oh, I'm going to pair Sirius and Lily together for the sake of it'. So major kudos for that!!

I loved the style of this - the short sentences. And your description! My God, if only I were capable of writing so flawlessly. There a certain charm to your writing that I can't put my finger on, but regardless of the piece I'm reading, it draws me in. You have a way with words, my friend, and for that I'm truly envious.

10/10 since I don't know how to make the infinity sign on my keyboard and I just pressed the zero randomly, lol.

Great job, Kalina! You never cease to amaze me! :)

Author's Response: Molly, you know perfectly well you can. You blow ME out of the water with your wonderful humor, I wish I could write it as well as you. Me, I write so much angst you must think I live a horrible, horrible life. You know, I used to hate it very much, now I adore it. I read timeturner's "Reckless" a while ago, and it absolutely converted me.

The short sentences I felt fit Sirius better than long flowy things like "My mind was a turmoil of ephemeral thoughts going over the waterfall of my emotions" (Yes, O_o indeed). *blush* Thank you so much, Molly. And I haven't the faintest idea how to do infinity either, and even if I did, I wouldn't tell you, because I most certainly do not deserve it.

Thank you so much, darling. *hugs*
XOXO, Kalina

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