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Review:AntigoneBlack says:
This pairing is WONDERFUL. I love it. But I think there are a few things that would really make this story fantastic. You need to start putting in descriptions, your story runs on dialogue and reads like a play at times. There is a wonderful description workshop in the Writers resources on the forums. I know this because I faced the same problem. Your dialouge is great and this plot is very interesting, but I just want you to really get it to the best it can be.

Good work, and I can't wait to see how this all plays out with the torture and such.

Author's Response: More descriptions? I can do that... I check out that workshop.

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