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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Aw, wow!

This was a very interesting story. Julietta seems like an interesting character. I'm not too sure about her though. She seems rather Mary-Sueish to me, but I'm sure you will prove me wrong in the chapters to come.

You opened this magnificently. It felt a little like poetry. When you contrasted "nothing less" and "nothing more" between them, it was amazing and beautiful and sensational to read. And then at the end when they spoke "take it as a proposal" and "take it as a yes," I could feel their love for each other. It's strong. ;) It's amazing that you can send it across like that.

Poor Dominique. It's so interesting that you have created her a mute. I have a one-shot about a mute. You don't see many mute stories around here.

Although I totally have the feeling Dominique will come into play with Julietta and Scorpius' lives in the feature. I feel bad for her. Maybe she will magically learn how to talk! ;)

Excellent job!

8/10

Author's Response: Thank for for reviewing (and so quickly)!

Mary-Sueish? Oops. I thought I put in some of her flaws like how she was too arrogant, too dominating, too demanding. I hope she doesn't come off Sue-ish in the future. I'll definitely put more effort in keeping her off that track.

Another mute? Really? I'll be sure to check it out! ^_^ The idea of a mute fascinates me, since it's rarely ever done.

There will be more on Dominique in the next chapter and she will meet both Julietta and Scorpius eventually. I will say now that Dominique will never be able to talk again. She will stay mute. I wanted to stay away from that happening, because in my mind, those kinds of recoveries aren't too realistic. :)

Thank for the review! I'm so glad you liked it!
- Celeste


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