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Review:Christina says:
I like this chapter, but you are confusing me, because now Lily has started calling her lucy in front of all the marauders. Do they know her name now or what? i also noticed in chapter ten Regulus called her lucy, also.

Author's Response: I realized that Lily calls Lucy by her name a few times and figure that James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter wouldn't catch on right away, especially in the middle of something crazy. (Well, I'm kind of banking on that, anyway.) Also, I think Regulus should probably know her real name, but since he and Sirius aren't exactly "chummy", they wouldn't really discuss her. (Plus, as far as anyone knows, he and Lucy aren't "friends".)
I'm really, truly sorry that I confused you in this chapter. If you have any other questions please don't hesitate to ask me: I'll clear everything up for you right away, promise. I'm glad you liked it, really glad, but I'll try my best to keep it clearer from now on, or at least try to explain things in an Author's Note, just in case.


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