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Review:confusedlover says:
very lovely.

i thought that you did an amazing job on this little one-shot. you really did a nice job of displaying both the uncertainty and the desire that Sirius felt throughout those few long minutes. that was what i was indeed expecting and so i found it very splendid when i realized that you were doing that. it added a certain element to this that made it seem all the more believable. realistic plot are always good to see even when pairings aren't and so great job on that.

your flow was honestly stupendous. at no point did i see that you sped up to quickly or slowed down at all and that is simply great to see. i love it when stories are easily readable and presented and this was certainly no exception to that.

you language was also done incredibly well. your dialogue- as little of it as there was- appeared to be in perfect condition with you plot and you entire writing style appeared to be very individual and unique. i am simply very impressed.

overall, i thought that this was a wonderful story. as i mentioned before, the emotions portrayed were nice and complex and i have nothing at all to complain about. feel free to stop by my thread and request again anytime. amazing job on this.

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, that was such a lovely review! I can't believe it. This story actually isn't a one-shot though, as soon as the queue opens back up I'm going to submit chapter two.

I'm very glad that you enjoyed it though! That's so great to hear. It's a great confidence booster, that's for sure. Thanks again, your time is really appreciated.

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