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Review:Alopex says:
Wow! You know, you do tend toward shorter chapters in general, but there don't seem to be many writers on this site who can pack as much punch into a short chapter as you do. The beginning of this chapter was a bit funny with the purple foam and all, but it really just set up those final few paragraphs, where the real meat of the story lay.

Based on the prompt, I was expecting a successful declaration. However, I am once again impressed by your creative take on a prompt! This story could not have worked with any character except Tonks. I felt so embarassed for her. Not only that she was about to make a public declaration of love (how embarassing is that, in a school?), but that she knocked herself out doing it! Man, I bet she wanted to just sink through the floor. Poor girl. This story makes me wonder "what if . . ." though, haha.

Author's Response: I know I do tend towards shorter chapters in general anyway, but of course one of the aims of these drabbles was to make them short and yet still write an effective piece, I glad I was able to achieve that.

When I thought of using Tonks for this piece, I just couldn't have it end any other way, besides I do like to do things differently and didn't want it to be a totally cliched declaration of love. I'm glad I made you wonder "what if.." and maybe I cheated just slightly with that prompt, because as you know I am a big on sticking to canon in my fanfics, so my take on writing a non-canon pairing was to still make it seem as if it could have been canon lol.

Thanks so much for the review.

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