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Review:long_live_luna_bellatrix says:
Haha, I was thinking of Hugo while reading this too... I really liked this. I can definitely see Hermione doing something like this, because her thoughts while admiring the shoes were nearly identical to mine while looking at expensive and perfect clothing. You wrote her, and Ginny, very nicely. The flow of the story was, it was quick but didn't feel rushed. This goes to my favorites! Your writing was perfect here. Just the right amount of inner monologue, dialogue, description, the works. Great job! 10/10!

Author's Response: I'm really sorry for the late reply! Life has been so busy :(

But thank you so much! It's really lovely to see people are enjoying this story - I was actually really hesitant to put up, because I thought readers would think it totally unlikely Hermione would ever succumb to pink shoes. For some reason, I can see this happening though ^_^ Okay, I'm going to stop rambling now. Thank you so much for such a lovely review, I'm so glad you liked the story!


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