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Review:DarkLadyofSlytherin says:
Without a word, he passed and handed me his card.
So something I can nitpick at, for once, lol is the following.

"Identification, so that Marshal knows where everyone is at all times. You'll get yours by tomorrow, I expect, but there's a backlog right now."

Brilliant. An absolutely unfashionable piece of plastic to wear round my neck all day long. I smiled and said: "Okay!" Joey grinned and handed me his lanyard.
Is it really required to hand the lanyard to her twice? I'm pretty sure you only meant to hand it off once to her, but I thought I'd point that out to ya.

As for the rest of it, I loved it. And let me tell you, I love that the dragon came to play cause Katie had a smoke. Teach you to smoke you silly girl! Don't you know smoking can kill you!? lol Anyway, love it, love it, love it. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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