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Review:Elesphyl says:
Whoah ... Len, the descriptions in this were amazing. Beautiful, beautiful writing. The moon, the night, the stars - everything had such a "you" touch to it, and it was really just right. Not too much, not too little.

One thing I don't get, though, is why the ghost said he was part of Teddy. I didn't get that at all - and the idea that the woman locked him in the room to starve to death was amazingly ... gruesome. XD Not in a bad way. I'm not sure I'm entirely convinced that the reason why Teddy couldn't sleep was because of the ghost, but it was a wonderfully original touch.

Chapeau, my dear. An amazing one-shot, with, I'm sure, much more to come from you. :)

XOXO, Kalina

Author's Response: Kali,
Thank you so much for reading this. You know I always look forward to seeing a review from you.

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