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Review:DarkLadyofSlytherin says:
So, since you didn't bug me and I decided to come review this one (since you've been talking about it since you started it) for your Review Circle on Inkstains.

I absolutely love the way you've written this. Its sarcastic, its funny, it has a dash of hope that something good might yet come for Kate with all the gloom and doom that is already there. It had me laughing from beginning to end and definitely had my attention from the get go.

I love how original it is, and that you used tunnels for getting around. Course, I can't imagine wanting to use streets what with dragons about. So I suppose that's why you went that way.

As always, I can't find a darn thing to say you could to better. Which says a lot since I always write in first person and you typically do not. What I love best though, is that it doesn't have too many words that might require me to use a dictionary to determine what the heck you meant. Its very common, down to earth, every day language and that's what makes me love this fic all the more (not that I don't love any of your flowery writing cause you know I do!).

Author's Response: I didn't bug you because I didn't want to seem annoying. So ha! There. :P

I'm glad you like the format! And yeah, there is hope, even in the darkest of times - and I'm thrilled it made you laugh! Original? *blushes* It's just a girl in Romania, which I'm sure a bunch of Charlie/OC fics have already done. XD And don't worry, the dragons aren't wandering around. It's mainly because of the cold.

Oh, I'm sure you could find something! LOL, it's really fun to write even though I don't feel completely comfortable (and that probably comes through in my writing). Common and down-to-earth is good, especially since that's how I pictured Kate.

Thanks so much for this review, Len! *huggles* It means so much. XOXO, Kalina

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