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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
Y'know, the title of this chapter made me laugh as soon as I'd finished reading. Teenage pregnancy, smoking... All things "typical" of teenagers these days xD. And for some reason I really liked this line "I was in it for the look." It speekz tha troofs.

You asked me if this is still "fresh"... and it sort of confused me. Novels that were written YEARS ago would still be fresh to me if I hadn't read them before xD. So yes, this is "fresh" because I've never read it. :D

One thing I have to pick at is that Neville speech sounds a little off. His character is great, it's JUST his speech. You've changed his character a little to suit the whole situation with the war, but his speech has just gone a little too far, in my opinion.

Your writing is flawless, and I love reading it. It's so smooth and just... I can't think of a word for it. But it's good.

Sorry that this review took its time to get to you, I generally avoid doing longer fics until I absoloutly have to, but now I've read this I want to R&R all of it. So you'll be hearing from me again, but it may take a day or two. I don't want you thinking I've just dissapeared because your story put me off OR because I'm getting fed up of you (which is pretty much impossible considering everything you've given me to review so far has been different xD).

9/10 :)

Author's Response: Thank you! It's interesting that you point out the chapter title here because when I titled it Typical Tuesday, I wasn't thinking about the heavy subjects that would appear in the first chapter... Good point =P

Hm... Neville's dialogue is off? Okay, thank you for pointing that out. I'll keep that in mind for when I write him in the future. =)

Thank you so much! It's no problem; take as long as you need to. I really appreciate your reviews, so I'll wait ^_^



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