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Review:redherring says:
Oh, that was just hilarious! Few stories on this site have genuinely made me laugh out loud, but this was just so funny that I couldn't help it! Here are some of my favourite lines:

Ever heard of the underpants gnomes or Aunt Hermione's sense of humour? Well they don't exist and come under the category of Myths.

I also used words like 'wanker' and 'prat' and 'undesirable number one'. The last one got me sent to my room.

What's more, I remember my dad and his reaction.
And he gave them a beer.

I also loved Harry's attitude to the whole thing - it seems very in-character for him, and I've always imagined that he would be rather overprotective of his children, especially Lily as she's both the youngest and a girl. I also liked your characterisation of Lily - I loved how sarcastic she was and how she (used to) have Harry wrapped around her little finger.

My only real criticism is that there were quite a few grammar mistakes and typos, so might I suggest getting a beta? They can be really helpful for spotting any mistakes :)

Brilliant first chapter! 9/10.

Author's Response: I think you've just pointed out my favourite bits of the story right there :P. Also, I appreciate your feedback. Thanks.

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