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Review:Indigo Seas says:
Oh, Marina, this was lovely. It was so short, but really lovely. I think it's great that, in this kind of challenge, the writer says what he/she needs to say and doesn't write anything more. You pulled off the word-count brilliantly, my dear.

I don't really have any criticism! I mean, you made the kiss in the rain not cliche in the slightest (partly because of the extremely intriguing pairing you've conjured up!). Kisses in the rain are so often something that fluffy writers make sickly-sweet and predictable, but, as I said, this was wonderful. I think it's partly because Argus is such a complex character, he is very hard to make cliche. You allowed the reader to really see what Rosmerta was thinking about Filchy, which was great. :)

I really loved all of your descriptions! I mean, you only had 500 words to work with, but I still think you had great descriptions in there. Especially this line: "As my palm flared against the rough wood of the door, our eyes met." I have no idea why I like it so much, but I find it really... lovely.

I really have nothing to complain about! Marina, you have wowed me again, and I'm an absolute fan-girl now. :) Well done.

10/10

- Rin

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