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Review:laughhard91 says:
Haha. Of course Rose is in Italy. That's really actually funny. Good chapter. There were a few slow parts in it, but it was a long enough chapter that it turned out alright. I really want to know what happened with Astoria and Draco (he just randomly shows up and you left us hanging there), but the bits with Scorpius and Carmella were nicely done. Oh, and by the way, what happened to Demons?

Author's Response: Haha, of course she is! This is fanfiction after all, where the unlikely is always allowed to happen! (and so generally does!) lol xD

Ah, yes, I wasn't sure about the part with Draco. I originally had a whole scene with him and Astoria talking, but then I cut it because I didn't really like it and also it made the chapter far too long. As it is, though, I'm not sure I made a big enough deal about him being there. Hmm, I'll have to work on that a bit...[/ramble]

Oh, I deleted Demons, actually :( It just really wasn't going anywhere and it got to the point where I just really didn't enjoy writing it anymore. I just felt like it was crammed full of cliches, the plot was unoriginal, the characters were OOC... I'm considering re-writing and possibly re-posting it sometime in the future, though, so watch this space!

Thanks so much for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed it overall! :)



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