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Review:Jellyman says:
This was different. Brilliant, and different. Nice mix :D

I really liked it, Marina, well done. I was very intrigued when I saw that you had a Rosmerta/Filch - I don't think anyone one would have guessed such a ship, let alone write about it. So kudos on INCREDIBLE originality!

As for your characterisations, I really liked them. I think I would have been immediately turned off if Filch returned Rosmerta's feelings immediately, so well done on keeping them in character :) Rosmerta was brilliantly portrayed - I liked how she considered herself a dying beauty, and her train of thought assessing Filch was really well done!

Overall, this was brilliant. The flow was great, each train of thought leading to the next. Your language was really well used and some of your turns of phrase gave such incredible imagery. My only critique would be that in some parts the language actually took over the meaning of what you were trying to say - like, the language seemed a bit too complex for what you were conveying. Perhaps it was just me and my renowned slowness (:P) - it didn't take away from the piece at all, but I thought I'd comment on it.

Anyway, brilliant one-shot! While I still despise Filch, haha, this was still incredibly enjoyable! Well done. And I loved the last line!

10/10

Author's Response: Filch = love :) thanks, Georgia :D

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