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Review:brad says:
Aw, come on, you've got to write a sequel, describing the 'interesting wedding' and the furore that erupts when *that question* is asked!!

(Does Neville know a counter to the Bat Bogey curse?)

I guess this is a story that you can't publish on Portkey, given how you're - sob! - keeping Harry and Hermione apart, trapped in their entanglements with their respective Weasleys.

Unless you write that sequel, of course ...

The 'hidden moment' on the train didn't convince me ... it's a pity there wasn't a sentence or something in the canon text on which you could hook the idea. Like you did the failure of Ron's spell on non-rat Pettigrew.

But Hermione's reaction to Harry's 'death' was quite riveting. Okay, I was half-grimacing because of the overt nature of their 'bond' - the more you extol their mystical and super-deep connection the more incongruous their marrying other people and remaining ignorant of what they mean to each other seems - but the drama of it, Hermione's reaction, her side of things, was nicely done.

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