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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
I doubt anyone could write Filch/Rosmerta like you! :-)

I think you got the tone just right -- writing these two as a typical lovey-dovey romance would be almost farcical. So I liked that we saw it all through Rosmerta's eyes, which allowed you to keep Filch's feelings a total secret.

I like that Rosmerta felt capable of being herself around him, because his indifference meant there was no pressure to please him, and that she was trying to figure out who he is and what he's about, and trying to understand him. For me, that's where the romance came into play. That's sort of the essence of a relationship, being your true self and understanding one another, and that's what Rosmerta was trying to do, even though maybe she was fighting a losing battle.

ANYWAY...additional kudos for accomplishing this in 500 words. :-)

I also loved the ending. Gotta love stories without total resolution!

10/10

Author's Response: lol XD I think you have to think of the ship before you write one, and I dont think there's anyone as weird as me :P Thank you so much for the review, I really enjoyed writing this piece :D

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