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Review:Reeses says:
This is such a believable OC; you don't know how refreshing it is to find a character that's, well, normal. XD And not just average-normal, but realistically normal. Like I might find this girl at my school, y'know?

It's also different to have a Sirius that is not a player. :D Not exactly sure what I think of this - but you write so brilliantly that, even if it's not my preference, I'll keep reading.

... Oh dear, this review doesn't sound very compliment-ish, does it? 8D You're a wonderful writer!

And now it's complete ^-^

Author's Response: That's great to hear about Eleanor. I tried to make her normal, but worried that I'd gone too far, making her exaggerated instead of realistic. :)

Sirius was harder to write. It's so easy to fall into the popular fanon version of him, hooking up with all the girls and seducing many more. :P Hopefully he turns out in a way you'll like.

Thank you very much! I'm glad you've liked the first chapter and were able to be complentish. ^_^


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