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Review:AntigoneBlack says:
Your writing style is very good, you have very few grammar mistakes here. Which is a relief for me. Well written.

I am going to be honest. I am confused. Really confused. You didn't state in your summary what parts of the books you are not following, so I don't really know where I am. Dumbledore is alive and the trio are at hogwarts for 7th year, which leaves me to believe this takes out those two. But to give your reader perspective you should either say where the story strays in the summary or at the start of the chapter.

I really liked that you had them in a purely physical relationship. It worked out really well, because you had a chance to throw in some emotions at a later time. I enjoyed that part.

Author's Response: Thankyou for reading and reviewing :)

Yes you're right, my story disregards the last two books. I honestly didn't think about that at all, and I'm glad that you've picked this out and in the future I will be sure to state whether or not I'm following the plot of the books.

Thanks for your honesty!

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