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Review:Axjion says:
I stumbled across this at [TGS] and it interested me so, and I had to read it. I'm glad that I did.

You've really put into perspective so many new ideas about their infamous relationship: How did they really feela bout each behind closed doors? How did her pregnancy affect their relationship? Did she fear what her child would've had the potential to become?

Now, I adore that this was written in the present tense because it seems to add to the mood you've given off. I don't quite often see things this powerful and poetic, and it's something I must applaud and even bow to.

It awing how you've shown them to be people with really opposing personality using such few words; she loved the moon, he loved the sun.

This was a strong, well-thought-out and wonderful piece and it something beyond simple promise.
-Axjion

Author's Response: Hey Axe! Well, you know, I never found any canon relevance to Remus loving Tonks as much as Tonks quite so obviously loved him (for seemingly no reason, just that she could). I'd always seen Remus as desperately in love with either Sirius or Lily, for some odd reason. Oh well.

The present tense third person is one of my favorite styles of writing - it gives much more power, in my opinion, to the words and much more emotion. Bow to! *laughs* No, you shan't bow to me. But thank you! *blush*

I loved the metaphors of the earth, sun, and moon so much - though they're over-cliched, here they work, especially because of the werewolf connotations.

I'm so pleased you liked this, Axe! Thank you so much for the lovely, lovely review. :)
XOXO, Kalina


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