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Review:shadowycorner says:
It's been four days already? But the train had to come back by the same tracks, no? And where do they pee? Gah, four days in such small space with strange people would turn anyone into a psycho. That makes the reactions these people are having pretty plausible. Still, though, someone had to find out they were missing or...something.

I sort of found out where the horror is in this piece. It's in the minds of people who are stuck together, really as if in a cage. Not as if, but for real. It's a very ood twist, but it also gets sort of repetitive as well. Still it's interesting to read and Vandy's breakdown was brilliant. I think I grinned a little when after it, Clyde became sort of calm and...okay, what do we do now?

Overall, this is all very interesting. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, well... For the sake of the story, it's been a while and no one has found them =P I need a little bit of leeway from the reader with this story, y'know? Help me out here. Humor me ;-)

Yes! Exactly! That is the true horror that I was trying to portray. I can't explain how excited I am that you understood what I was going for. ♥

Thank you!

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