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Review:The Empress says:
Kalina it's amazing!! Absolutely stunning work :) This has got to be one of the best 'missing moments' sort of pieces I've ever read. I commented this in the discussion forum over at TGS, but I could see this as not being just that Remus doesn't love her or her child, but that he is afraid. I love Remus, he's one of my favorite characters, but I have always seen him as someone ruled by his fears and his self-loathing. I can see this tying in with that view of him.
However you meant it, it came out wonderfully. It's a tender sort of sadness that pulls me in and lingers. I love it.
~Shiloh

Author's Response: Shiloh! *dies* Thank you so much! I didn't really think of it as a "missing moment" piece, to be honest - and I just read your comments over at TGS - thank you again!! Yes, Remus is definitely afraid, and he does display a lot of inner conflict, which I personally find fascinating. It's not that he didn't love the child, but that he finds it to be a victim of his folly - had he controlled himself a little more, it wouldn't have been such.

Thank you so much for this, Shiloh. I'm so thrilled you liked it. ^_^
XOXO, Kalina


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