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Review:shadowycorner says:
Sorry it's taken me so long to get back here, but I'm always so exhausted once i come home that i don't have enough intellectual energy to form good enough reviews. I read these two chapters a week ago and really liked them. I liked the twist in Vandy's nature toward Clyde, but I can't say I like her. As a character though, not the way she's written. And I haven't quite gotten well with Luna, but I like both Clyde and Neville, especially Neville. You do a great job in writing him.

I was shocked and even a bit thrilled by Clyde's nature throughout this chapter. The way you described the inner state of him was very good. With all the crazy jumbled and conflicting thoughts. Although I doubt something like that would come from not smoking for half a day. But then I got to thinking...zomg, maybe he's schizophreniac!! It seemed like that, heh, but my theories are almost always wrong, so...

I wonder what will happen next. This story really is one that leaves me guessing and wanting to know what happens next. If only I actually could read the whole piece in one go, I would. It's good stuff what you have here. And I can't wait until I get to read the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: No problem. I totally understand =P

Thank you! I actually find it a compliment to hear that you don't like Vandy, because that means I wrote her well enough to produce a real reaction from you, right? =D I didn't really like her either. She was pretty rude =P

You know, I'm not a smoker, so I don't really know what it would be like to go a half day without one, but I had to amp up the drama a little bit =P

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story and I hope you like the rest of it ^_^

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