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Review:Pookha says:
I'm going to be slightly nitpicky first. Portkey is one word. 'I sat there shaking as he was lead to the elevator' should be '...led to the elevator.' Auror and Floo should both always be capitalized.

Now that the nitpicking is done, I thought this was another excellent chapter. You do a good job building Mary's terror and sadness at having to face her parents' killer and it really makes you feel for her. Remus is very likeable and supportive in the bits of him that we see here and in the first chapter.

I also really like your descriptions of the interior of the Ministry and the way the Auror's offices are set up.

I said in my first review that your writing seems polished and mature, and I'm sticking by that. Another excellent chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for another excellent review. It's made me smile reading it. So thank you.

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