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Review:marauders_girl11 says:
oy! sirius' eyes are gray!


this story is so sad, i was nearly crying myself though half of it. i wish you could have made it like a cover-up in the newspaper instead of what really happened. poor sirius. you know, they never said 'i love you' or anything, or even if they did love each other.

oh, can't there be a second chapter? like where sirius sees nikki again three years later to find it was a coverup newpaper topic, and she says goodbye and that she loved him? that would make the story much, much better, because a bitter end just depresses everyone, you know?


to dream timelessly is to fly under the stars, without the limit of where you're wings can take you- me.

-Nickole.

Author's Response: Oops! I changed it in my other story, but not in this! I love Sirius's grey eyes, I just thought I had changed it. Thanks for the point out.

I know this is really sad! And it does sort of have a bitter end doesn't it? Sorry, but I don't think that I will be able to write another chappie, she is dead. I didn't want her to die though, it just came into my head.

Lucky for you, I am about to post a new story that has a happy ending! Finally, for once.

Don't cry because it is over, smile because it happened. (I found this after I posted it)

Thanks for R&R, Hugs
HPB


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