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Review:CnConrad says:
This was a great epic story. I am currently waiting on the Crusader.

I have one question though. Wasn't Potter suppose to raise an army of the remaining Aurors?

I have a few complaints on how the story ended. No, they are not typical complaints.

1 Rebecca that name means nothing to me anymore he said sadly. It was all so quick, but now it is too late- those two were Sol and Steven, weren't they?
- I was sorry to see these guys die, they were so loyal to Potter they would have made great soldiers in the upcoming war.

2 She wanted him, always did. But like this, it would be cruel to have them raise a son in this time of darkness. Even so, his will was her own, she was forever bound to him by magic. She would willingly bear him a son.
- I realize the bonding thing that Rebbecca did and now she must stay loyal to him. I hoped that she would kind of embrace her new destiny rather than make it so obvious that she was just a slave to it.

Nice job on removing all the secondary characters though.

Author's Response: Q&A time! cool

1. Yes he will, and it will arise out of the muggles deciding to wage war on magic folk, and needing a leader for a strong arm resistance to survive.

2. Sol and Steven were doing their job and ended up casualites in the assassination of the MoM. They had a duty to protect and therefore fodder for the Dark Lord.

3. The Harry Poter she knew was a talented soldier and a humble person. The factors of his school life and love/friendship has been lost, so now he's more of a loose cannon bent on vengeance. But, lets say for contiunity's sake she learns to accept her position and is now content to be his mate and mother to his son. Thats what she wanted in the first place. Can't have her cake and eat it too :D


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