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Review:radicallyali says:
Wow you got the second chapter up here quickly! Kudos to you! It takes me forever to get around to writing and posting!

Alrighty. So. The introduction of more characters. Marshal, I know Kate doesn't really like him, but I've got no beef with him, other than the messiness. I think bosses should have organized work spaces, but perhaps Marshal doesn't spend much time in his office, which would then make sense.

Also, I feel like Joey is going to become one of Kate's good friends, and that he is going to be one of my favorite characters.

We saw a little bit more of Charlie, but not much. I can't wait for some Charlie/Kate action going on!

This is was very good! 10/10!

Author's Response: Hehe, well, I was already writing it at the time I posted the first chapter and the words just kept on flowing. XD

Well, I don't (personally) have any beef with Marshal either, but have you noticed that Kate is particularly quick to judge people on first impressions? She doesn't like because ... she doesn't like him. That's just the way she works. Same thing with Charlie.

Haha! Nice spotting that, although I wouldn't necessarily say one of her good friends. He's definitely being a lot of fun to write right now. ^_^

Charlie/Kate action will come, be patient! :P In any case, I'm very happy you liked this and thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)

XOXO, Kalina

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