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Review:SnitchSnatcher says:
You've done it again, Kali! I've fallen in love with this story. And it's only the first chapter. Honestly, I don't know why you're so worried about the first person - you obviously have a fantastic grasp of it and write it far better than I could ever dream (and most of my stories are in first, lol). I love Kate, but I can already tell that I'm going to adore Mads, mainly because she reminds me of the crazy roommate from 'Failure to Launch'. That may also be because her face is Zooey Deschanel, who I love, by the way, so that earned you an additional thumbs-up.

However, as funny as that particular sequence was, I've one thing to say - Charlie! Oh my, CHARLIE. God. Like, literally. God. He is a god, just like Kate said. I loved the 'don't wake Charlie' bit - reminded me of the whole Hogwarts motto, you know? I already love him and the potential relationship between he and Kate. I should probably prepare myself for future laughter - there's going to be lots!

Great job, Kali! This is fantastic!

Author's Response: Honestly? I've yet to read Committed - but I'm sure you write it far better than I do (the summary for "Conventional Wisdom" alone had me in stitches!) - you've been at it for much longer than I have. Haha, I'm happy you like Mads. Yes, she is very much inspired by the crazy roommate in "Failure to Launch" (I loved her in that! Along with Justin Bartha ... yum) .

Charlie! Yes, Charlie is such a darling. I'm so happy you caught that! Never tickle a sleeping dragon, hehe. And that's precisely what she did. Dear God!

In any case, I'm so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for this amazing review, Molly. ILYSM.
XOXO, Kalina

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