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Review:Fuzzy_Slippers says:
Hm, first person to comment on this chapter; that's odd. I'm not sure why, but this chapter was just about my favorite. Maybe it was the fact that, for a moment, I was sure you were going to go for the whole 'she'll agree to marry him' thing, but then you shocked me completely with her escape. It was a surprising and welcome twist; Mary has more up her sleeve than I gave her credit for. : )
And Remus and Mary are together again. : D The end of the chapter was really sweet.
The description in this chapter was especially nice; I especially loved when you mentioned the colors of the sunset as 'coppery'. For some reason, I don't hear it described like that often. Very nice : D

Hate to do it but, a couple of comments. : /.
'Shacking away the thoughts of possible deaths, I desided' typo there. And 'Why can't you understand there', I think you meant 'that'. Also, when you describe Vienna, you mention she was wearing a 'white dressed' instead of dress. : )

Well, you've only got one more review of mine (for now) where I can nitpick you to death. : ) I'm off to go leave it.

Author's Response: I wanted some dramatic, creative escape for this chapter. I knew I couldn't leave her to marry him - though there had been moments where I was willing to do that and see Remus rescue her from Selwynn, but it just wouldn't have worked out nearly as well.

I love describing sunsets, they are my favourite to write. When I see a sunset (which I often do as my window points in the direction the sun sets in), I watch as the sky changes colours from the beautiful blue to an orangey yellow that often reminds me of pennies sometimes, to that amazing twilight purple. So, when I think the sky reminds me of pennies that is copper, it's only natural to describe the sky as coppery. At least, that's my explanation and I'm sticking to it! lol

Whoops, more typos to fix. Once I have all of your 'nitpicky' comments, I'll fix them all at once. :D


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