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Review:Fuzzy_Slippers says:
Whoa, seizures. That's another interesting thing; it only helps to make Mary seem more real. I wonder what her parents were talking about when they told her about that lab . . .hmm . . .
I like what you're doing with this clue thing. The crystal roses were sweet in an incredibly creepy way.

Overall, I liked the chapter once again. I noticed that in this sentence ' Elaenor added kneeling beside Mary' you switched to third person for a second. And 'I woudl find where Remus was no matter . . .' towards the end. Typo. : )

Well, I'm going to go open up my slots for two other stories, but once I give two others a chance to get some reviews, and give you some time to respond to all of mine, I'll come back and review the last two without no re-request needed.
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Author's Response: The seizures have a lot to do with the plot down the line, this was the only time I could fit them in so I didn't just throw it at the reader when they become important. As does the lab. It shall all make sense in the end.

The crystal roses...ah they are my favourite part of the clues. I wanted something different, something unique that I might never have seen in other fics. This was what I came up with. They are definitely sweet and definitely creepy. But that's Selwynn for ya. Creepy to the bone.

Yay for stupid typos, will definitely get them fixed up. And I do hope you'll come back and read the rest. Chapter twelve should be available soon. :D Thanks for the amazing review.

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